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"Mes de los Muertos"

Long Goodbye

By Luis Cuauhtemoc Berriozabal

Long Goodbye

Like a long goodbye,
the last day of summer,
autumn’s coffin brought
a funeral feeling on its

first day. I had a slow
heart beat and the sound
was deaf. All the leaves
began to fall. I longed

for frozen winter snow.
I discovered hell on earth,
like being forced to work
outside in a winter storm.

My body felt like a frozen
piece of meat, like a frost-
bitten toe. Summer’s long
goodbye lingered in shadows.







Article © Luis Cuauhtemoc Berriozabal. All rights reserved.
Published on 2023-09-25
Image(s) are public domain.
1 Reader Comments
michael ceraolo
10/02/2023
11:27:35 AM
First-rate work, Luis.
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